Wednesday, January 20, 2010

New Poem

Here's a surprise admission by none other than anonymOOkie..
Who used to have an awesome blog then disappeared into the great black hole of the blogosphere..

g-d is amazing

let me tell you why

he created us - HUGEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

ginormous

monstrously massive

and then

He squished us into this tiny (FREAKIN ANNOYING) little body

can you imagine anything more cruel than a huge entity being compressed into a tiny space, with no room to breath, nowhere to move, no space to experience freedom?


so what did He do?

He gave us a brain and a heart

a gateway into our soul

a portal out of our soul

hashem gave us these gross slimy organs so our soul could breath, find room to move and most importantly experience freedom......

now.. why do I say all this?

because my soul's been feeling squished

compressed

constricted by layers upon layers of fears and thoughts and skin and sins and earth and dirt and dollars and inhibitions and sadness and uncertainty

and today

clarity

my soul, through a tiny entryway found its way out

projecting brilliantly, and beautifully empowering ideas

radiating with life

freeing it

and

now i feel

like

i can breath

once again.

ideas,

and

or

feelings

can save us

when we're drowning

and i think mine just did...




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2 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem!
    Maybe you should think about reopening that awesome blog...

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  2. I agree with Anonym00kie (where have you been? Come visit me!).

    Our souls are contained (compressed, what have you) into our physical bodies, part of the physical world-which Gerald Schroeder says might be embedded in the metaphysical world: there is a dimension around us which we cannot sense with our senses.

    I wish I could write poetry like that...

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